This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hello this is my Maori weather sentences i forgot to spell Maori right sorry. But i hope you enjoy it! It did take me a long time to finish but at the end i got it done!! the making of the pictures were actually fun!
Hi Oscar James from SHS. I really like how you put your Maori words next to your English words.You could work on your drawings. Also you dident have to put the words in the drawings. Anyway it really good.
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Hi Oscar James from SHS. I really like how you put your Maori words next to your English words.You could work on your drawings. Also you dident have to put the words in the drawings. Anyway it really good.
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