For literacy the past 3 day's we have been writing about stories we got to make our own story's with a friend and the challenge was to not talk you had to communicate on the doc using comments. I was working with Mitchell, we failed :/. But we got a lot of work finished! it was fun to! we had to make and introduction, Middle, End! here is my work Bye! what I found challenging was thinking of the ideas but writing them was easy!
Story
Introduction:
once upon a time An old man told these kids called Oscar and Mitchell that there was a mysterious cabin in the woods old and spooky it was like you were watching a horror movie. ¨psssst Sure there is¨ Mitchell said, ¨well.. Then you´ll have to find out yourself.¨ the old man said. So they set off.
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Over the mountain through the cold icy blizzard and finally at the creepy old woods. They keeped on moving through the damp woods. They were scared it was like a billion murderers were chasing them, then Oscar stepped on a twig and mitchell get´s a fright, But there it was the cabin ¨ Gulp¨ Oscar gulped. Let's go in they were anxious it was like They were going into a basement damp and spooky it was like there were alot of people that they didn't know. As it got dimmer and dimmer suddenly a light appears
A bright light like you were looking at the sun. as a bunch of rooms appeared and a trap door got set off Mitchell falling down but then oscar grabbing his hand at the last moment he could ¨Thanks Oscar!¨ Mitchell said ¨Let's keep on going. Cause there is no way out…. See!¨ Oscar said they looked back and then set off again jumping over the trap door then they walked into a room and the doors shut as a figure rising upon the ground, With one eye the other eye was gone, Blood spread all over him, and all torn up. ¨yeah nah,¨ they both said. As he started rushing towards them with
humans coming out of him they dodged it. Then they ran pressing a button and then fleeing. ¨That was a big oof!¨ oscar and mitchell said. Then a t.v comes out from the roof showing a camera on them. ¨Huh?¨ Oscar said. And then it lost connection. Then turning back on and a person with small white eyes and instead of white the ball is black and he's looking insane just staring at them. But then to turn back off and the doors opened. Then in the next room a piano playing just one deep key over and over. And they could hear whispers. But they couldn’t make out what they were saying. Suddenly they heard someone banging on the door and blood pouring down from the walls then. The door busted down
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the same guy appeared, but this time looking more crazy and sinister, holding a bloody knife in his hand. “Well, we need to work harder and faster.” Oscar said “Got it!” mitchell replied. Suddenly the crazy man started running really fast and tried to stab Mitchell but him and Oscar started beating him up started with the face MItchell kicked him in the face sending him flying then oscar jabbing his face on the table. The grabbing a shard Of glassing and stabbing it through his heart. He started making noises. Andhisfacedissolving then he turned into liquid. Never to be seen before then the piano stopping and the walls turning into logs they found themselves back in the cabin. “W-we did it?”
Oscar said confusingly. “But the door is blocked” Mitchell said. “I guess we’ll have to find a way out” He said again but a T.V turned on showing the dead body of the crazy person. Then turning off. A wall opened up and they walked out. “We finished yus!” Oscar said and they never came into those woods again. But every day they would see more and more hanged people and someone staring at them and they would always have the same bloody knife, one time they were also looking downn and saw two people lookong like them then they turned around with their faces looking like Oscar And Mitchell with their faces cut from mouth to cheek on both sides wiht one eyeball missing Oscars form the right and Mitchells from the left. And their arms missing oscars from the left and Mitchells from the right. Oscar and Mitchell started running once they started chasing after them with their mouths open and a horrible screech coming out of their mouths until they hit a wall they realized they were in stuck in this world they had to find a way out until a portal opened up and they ran through to find themselves in their normal world they never went near that froest again.
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