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In reading we made an identity drawing we had to fill out a servey from VIA! and the first five things wegto form the servey is what we had to put in with the picture. these were the first five things I got!
Hey Oscar, It's Miss Morgan here. Thank you for sharing this post with us. I really like the way you have shared what the picture is about and where you got the information from. Reading those words it seems like you are a pretty fun friend to have. Did you draw the person yourself? I wonder if you can make the picture a little bit bigger as I cant read the words around the outside very well. keep up the hard work, Miss Morgan
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Hey Oscar,
ReplyDeleteIt's Miss Morgan here. Thank you for sharing this post with us. I really like the way you have shared what the picture is about and where you got the information from. Reading those words it seems like you are a pretty fun friend to have. Did you draw the person yourself? I wonder if you can make the picture a little bit bigger as I cant read the words around the outside very well.
keep up the hard work,
Miss Morgan
OK! Thanks
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