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Friday 15 June 2018

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*caw caw* “oh no! Stay here raven you might be angry but please we dont want the queen to die!” *CAW CAW* and with that one call from the raven… The wind circled around both of them the raven turned really black. The tower grew bigger and bigger HUGER AND HUGER! Even though he felt scared he could face it! and he heard the heavy wind. He ran to the bird but it must of been radioactive because it pushed him over. Flowers falling down. The sky became darker and darker. The mans cape began to rip rocks became weird he smelt the unusual rocks somehow. His pants became red the ground began to crack he felt the stuff that the wind blew. It was scary how the tower was fine then it all stopped he tasted the rest of the wind and it became lighter  it was night it must of been a couple of hours *deep breaths* “please s-t-o-p thi-s once it’s day this will be over” he took deep breaths again he promised to the bird. that was my story i think… ok continued soon- its really good- Hunterf

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