“LOOK MUMMY BIRDS DELICIOUS BIRDS IM GONNA FLOP ON THEM!” yelled baby elephant
“No its an elephant RUN!” said one bird
“BABY ELEPHANT! I mean Jake!” mum yelled
“Yes mummy?” asked baby elephant
“Leave those birds alone they aren’t tasty they even once flapped their wings on ME,” mum said angrily
“Mummy that probaly wont happen,” baby elephant said annoyed
“Look brothers hes gonna flop on us!” said one bird
“HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA woops sorry we didn’t mean to HAHA,” said the laughing birds
“STOP OR ELSE!” baby elephant yelled really sad and angry
“Or else?” said the birds in a mocky voice
“OR ELSE ILL TELL MY MUMMY!” yelled baby elephant
“What she gonna do huh?” said one bird
“Shell shell waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa,” cried the baby elephant
“Haha lets go,” said one bird
“JEREMY stop being a bully!” said another bird
“Bob stop being a girl and fly away!” said jeremy
“Stop being ugl-.” said bob not knowing what to do
“Ugly? Your ugly and im stronger weak pathetic bird. ” jeremy said
“Whatever.” bob said in a bored voice
this is my writing from literacy its about a video we watched and it was funny
and this writing was FUN!
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